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This week's words:
Carnage; noun: The killing of a large number of people.
Jerk; noun: A quick, sharp sudden movement; a spasmodic muscle twitch; a contemptibly obnoxious person; verb: Move or cause to move with a jerk
Puncture; noun: A small hole in something, a tire or skin, made by a sharp object; verb: Make a puncture in (something); cause a sudden collapse of (mood or feeling).
Jerk; noun: A quick, sharp sudden movement; a spasmodic muscle twitch; a contemptibly obnoxious person; verb: Move or cause to move with a jerk
Puncture; noun: A small hole in something, a tire or skin, made by a sharp object; verb: Make a puncture in (something); cause a sudden collapse of (mood or feeling).
The mid day sun shone brightly in the vast blue sky.
Their skin appeared thickened and coarse, sparse garments covered their torso
above knees. Feet appeared planted in the fertile black soil. They moved
rhythmically planting and removing saplings. It seemed to me like all this was
a dance. I cycled along the narrow mud path which separated two huge paddy
fields. I was listening to the women singing and birds chirping. It all
appeared so much orchestrated. It looked like a green carpet, the paddy field.
Here and there I saw handmade cradles made of worn out sarees carefully tied to
strong branches. It was a beautiful sight. Sweat dripped along my forehead
constantly and it was difficult to wipe them, so I let it drop to the ground as
if to kiss the bare earth. It was my first day here so I began to observe my
surroundings very keenly. I cursed the heat but continued my journey along these
fields towards an unknown destination.
I halted my bicycle in a sudden jerk (not used to muddy roads) under a banyan tree and walked
with my bundle of letters towards the fields. A postcard was addressed to
Chennamma who worked in the fields of Doddegowdru. Among the sea of bent heads,
looking for Chennamma seemed a task. I went to a person who seemed to be the
supervisor, a typical guy actually! Huge belly, dark skinned, a mole near the
left lower orbital floor. I asked for Chennamma, he shouted her name loudly and
a couple of heads rose up with curious eyes. From the dress I wore, they
understood I was the bearer of news. All the six Chennammas, came running
towards the supervisor but their eyes fixed upon me. The supervisor seemed confused
and asked me ‘Which one?’ I looked at the address again, Chennamma, wife of
Kitchappa’. I repeated her husband’s name and only woman began to blush. Even
under the burning sun her expressions were so crystal clear, the very name of
her husband filled her heart with so much delight. She rose her hand slightly
and with bent eyes began drawing circles with her feet. The rest of the
Chennammas began to leave silently and the supervisor led us to the shade of
the banyan tree.
She was my first ‘client’ in Kudlooru. The shade of
the banyan tree seemed like a pleasant change to the scorching sun. Both of us
squatted on the grass which surprisingly was cool. She asked me to read the
letter. I straightened my spectacles and took a closer look at the post card. I restricted myself not only as a bearer of
news but also as a counselor since many of my clients were both illiterate and
naive. A few literate ones also consulted me in their affairs since they
thought I had worldly wisdom. Villagers believe that travelers like me earn
wisdom everywhere we go, the world being our school and life being our teacher.
She asked me anxiously about the events described in the letter and I read them
aloud but slowly making sure she is able to understand every word I speak.
Every district had a slang, a different accent and usage of the same language.
Kitchappa described his life in simple words, health
was good and work seemed fine. The city looked big with buildings and full of
vehicles. He enquired about the health of his parents and reminded his wife in
sweet words that his parents were old and might seem crude but they loved her a
lot. He enquired about the children’s health and studies. His last few lines
were about how his new city job could help clear loans. Chenamma wiped a tear
from the corner of her eye and took the post card from my hand. She thanked me
and began her enquiries ‘How is the city? I have seen in the television. Women
are very pretty there, isn’t it? I hear they don’t take care of their own
children and parents. Must be spending time doing all those colorful things to
their faces and hair…’ This woman spoke so comfortably as though she knew me
from ages. Yes I seemed to have earned her trust, this will help me later. I
nodded as in a reply and said ‘They have to work too, like you people!’ She
looked at me in complete shock, ‘Like me! You mean under the burning sun, on
all fours and some mean men shouting at you all the while?’ She took a break
and sighed and then carried on ‘I watch tv serials, either they are sitting on
chairs watching a small tv or they are gossiping about the family all the
while.’ I thought it was better to stay quiet. Women! Her supervisor called on
‘So, the whole afternoon you want to spend with that wretched postcard?’
Chenamma cursed the fellow and got up and went along leaving me and my bicycle
alone. I turned back to look yet again at the sea of bent heads. Wrapped by
hands of mother earth, they all looked like. I stopped for a second to enjoy
once again this sight of selfless love. And do they even know that they are
being held safely by mother earth’s hands? I prayed to the great mother whose
omnipresence can be felt in these green fields.
I rode through the muddy path crossing the green
fields into the temple street. Our culture so rich, so many gods at every turn
of a street there is a Ganesha idol, decorated with fragrant flowers. The
remover of obstacles. I got off my bicycle as I passed through the idol and
removed my chappals. I folded my hands with great reverence and said a quick
prayer. The next letter had to be delivered to the Temple priest of Sitaram
temple. I had heard a lot of this temple and was eager to visit it. The
opportunity presented itself today and my heart leapt with great joy. A white
envelope from Chennai with an elaborate address, all in capitals was addressed to
the temple priest. I dropped the envelope at the temple office and entered into
the temple to have a good darshan. My mind seemed so peaceful after an
encounter with Chennamma that now I was here to absorb holiness. The Sita Ram
darshan was a feast to the eyes. I was lost in a different world for what
seemed timeless.
My eyes opened and I was reminded by the bundle of
letters that there was more work to do. I took the Lord’s blessings and was on
my way back to the bicycle. The temple priest sat at the edge of steps with
head bent low. He seemed to be disappointed and lost. An inner voice urged me
to talk to him. The priest seemed to be around sixty years old and his eyes
beamed with devotion. Respect rose from the bottom of my heart and I began to
spoke him ‘Sir, are you in some deep trouble?’ He seemed shaken and lifted his
eyes to look at me. In his right hand tightly folded was the letter I had given. He wiped his tears and cleared his throat and began to speak. 'This letter is from my son who passed away a month ago in a terrorist carnage....' He broke into tears again. Just listening to him punctured my heart. I placed my hands on his elderly shoulders and looked into the vast sky. Blue. Huge. without an end, without a beginning... I prayed the almighty to give him the strength to overcome his tragedy. Words at that time seemed meaningless...With the bundle of letters I walked back to my halted bicycle...
to be continued...
there's a quiet rhythm that works its way into the way you narrate. i like. :)
ReplyDeleteThis is interesting I like it.
ReplyDeleteOnly a dentist can describe the position of a mole like you have. :) Nice story.
ReplyDeletethanks folks...
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